an actionscript tutorial Work harder
I don't think you spent enough time on the graphics. I also think that if you are going to make a actionscript tutorial, you should have more content. I did not like how you had to zoom in to find out what the script did. Plus this is begginer actionscript, Even I know the script in this tutorial . My suggestion is that you buy the action script book, poke around in it, and THEN make a tutorial.